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help me fix it.

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My favorite vacation spot is the U.S., I don´t like the beach, but I do like animals.
asked Oct 17 '11 at 01:52 anakaren Castillo New member

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I would add a word in the second sentence to relate it to the first:

 

"My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches there, but I enjoy the zoos, because I love animals."

link comment answered Oct 17 '11 at 06:29 Bahaa Mazid New member
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My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches, but I enjoy the zoos, because I love animals.

link comment answered Oct 17 '11 at 05:33 Shaila Fernandes Expert
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My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches, but i enjoy the zoos, because I love animals.

link comment answered Oct 18 '11 at 04:27 anareah New member

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