sentence help

help me fix it.

See example:

My favorite vacation spot is the U.S., I don´t like the beach, but I do like animals.

asked Oct 17 '11 at 01:52

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I would add a word in the second sentence to relate it to the first:

"My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches there, but I enjoy the zoos, because I love animals."

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answered Oct 17 '11 at 06:29

My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches, but I enjoy the zoos, because I love animals.

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answered Oct 17 '11 at 05:33

My favorite vacation spot is the U.S. I do not like to visit the beaches, but i enjoy the zoos, because I love animals.

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answered Oct 18 '11 at 04:27

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