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“Female Infanticides rise in India and China” (2000), “Anuradha Koirala, a woman fighting against sex slavery, awarded the ‘CNN Hero of the year’” (2010), “A female curator beaten up by a police officer for wearing a sleeveless shirt and interacting with men in Pakistan” (2011). Woman, in the twenty-first century, have been able to make the newspaper headlines which have been both good and bad. They have managed to explore the space, rule the media and fight for their rights. At the same time, they have also been able to maintain their traditional role as a mother, daughter, sister and woman. However, the fact that woman are still oppressed cannot be denied.

asked Oct 17 '11 at 00:04 Ojashwi Pathak New member

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Women in the twenty-first century have made headlines both good and bad.

They have managed to explore space, influence the media and fight for their rights.

At the same time, they have also been able to maintain their traditional roles as mother, daughter, sister and woman. However, the fact that women are still oppressed cannot be denied.

link comment answered Oct 18 '11 at 07:28 Mark Heyne Contributor

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