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Surgery

        Some must difficult days it is that days before surgery. It is make me feel concern ,fear and disturbed all the time. Especially if this surgery is dangerous. There are many problems of a surgery.           The reservations and surgical schedules are huge problem that faced any patients. I heard some time ago, there are a old man he must to do urgent operation as soon as possible but the hospital selected his surgery after month because there are many patients before him, so he must waiting the date of the process.           The medical errors  are committed  in medical result area lack experience or efficiency by the practitioner or categories or assistance is the result of the exercise or a modern and experimental treatment or as a result of the emergency requires speed at the expense of accuracy or nature of the complex therapy of up death incidence due to medical error rates high annually in most parts of the World which developed in the United States for example is estimated deaths from medical errors To approximately 98,000 deaths annually.             The success rate of surgery a profound impact on the psychological state of the patient because if he heard the success rate, for example 10% he will be feel so bad and he cannot go on.               I hope I will not doing any surgery at all and I always prayer for all patients to be OK and in a good health

asked Oct 16 '11 at 11:51 violet-1990 New member

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Some of the most difficult days are the days before surgery. I feel overwhelming concern, fear and constant dread, especially if the surgery involves a particularly dangerous. procedure. 

 

Putting together a surgery addresses many problems. Patients have to bear the inconvenience and problems in making reservations and surgical schedules. One time, there was an old man who needed to undergo an emergency operation, but the hospital made him wait for a month because there were several patients before him, so the old man was put on a waiting list.

 

(I will have to return to answer the rest later. Usually, we correct particular grammatical issues with a sentence, not full-fledged editing of lengthier pieces like this.)

link answered Oct 16 '11 at 13:17 Shaila Fernandes Expert

Thank you very much. Shaila, I'll be waiting For You violet-1990Oct 16 '11 at 13:43

I hope the rest of my edits reached you in time. Best wishes, Shaila. Shaila FernandesOct 17 '11 at 14:00

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The medical errors committed in the medical area are due to the lack of experience or efficiency of the practitioner and/or assistants. Sometimes, experimental treatment is done because an emergency requires speed at the expense of accuracy, or the complex nature of the therapy.

 

Annual rates of incidence of death due to medical error are high in most parts of the world. In developed countries, such as the United States, estimated deaths from medical errors is approximately 98,000 deaths annually.            

 

The success rate of surgery has a profound impact on the psychological state of the patient, because if he hears that the success rate is 10%, he is likely to feel less hopeful, and that he cannot go on.              

 

I hope I do not have to undertake any such high-risk surgery, and I will always prayer for the well-being of the patient.

link edited Oct 17 '11 at 14:02 Shaila Fernandes Expert

I really appreciate your help . Thank you <3 violet-1990Oct 17 '11 at 05:52

You're welcome! Shaila FernandesOct 17 '11 at 13:55

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link comment answered Oct 17 '11 at 03:43 violet-1990 New member

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