pronoun agreement

0

when i walk down the field, you could hear the crown roar.

is word "you" should be replace with a word "I"?

See example:

When I walk down the field, you could hear the crown roar.
asked Oct 14 '11 at 03:07 DJ New member

1 answer


0

You have to decide what you mean to say and get the pronoun to agree.

Also the tenses have to be consistent.

 

When I walked down the field, I could hear the crowd roar.

 

Walking down the field, you could hear the crowd roar.

link comment answered Oct 15 '11 at 05:08 Mark Heyne Contributor

Your answer


Write at least 20 characters

Have a question about English grammar, style or vocabulary use? Ask now to get help from Grammarly experts for FREE.