pronoun agreement

when i walk down the field, you could hear the crown roar.

is word "you" should be replace with a word "I"?

See example:

When I walk down the field, you could hear the crown roar.

asked Oct 14 '11 at 03:07

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You have to decide what you mean to say and get the pronoun to agree.

Also the tenses have to be consistent.

When I walked down the field, I could hear the crowd roar.

Walking down the field, you could hear the crowd roar.

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answered Oct 15 '11 at 05:08

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