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I went to the school fair last saturday. It starts at nine o'clock and finishng at six o'clock. I had a great time at the school fair. It was relly fun day.
I met mine friend Leo at the fair in the morning. He was a member of the fair committee. he said that I was glad so many people were coming this morning.
asked Oct 10 '11 at 05:07
esther yeung
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esther yeung
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"I had a great time at the school fair last Saturday. It ran from 9 am to 6 pm. I met my friend, Leo, who was a member of the fair's organizing committee, and he said he was glad they got a great turnout."
Best wishes,
Shaila.
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edited Oct 10 '11 at 21:20
Shaila Fernandes
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Missing a comma before "and he said. . ." -- Good answer otherwise.
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