Start of sentence
Please let me know whether the opening of this sentence is gramatically correct.
His mother having been dead for years, Jeebleh feels it is time for him to build a proper grave for her and to "locate his mother's story in the context of the bigger national narrative" .
While the beginning of the sentence is ok, the rest of it doesn't flow well. How about considering:
"Jeebleh feels it is time to build a proper grave for his long-deceased mother, and include her story in the broader national context."
If this is what you intended to communicate.
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