Sentence structure and word "your"


The family would appreciate your sending
Joyce a Birthday Card


On October 29th  we will surprise her with birthday cards from all her friends!

Please include a “remember when” sentence or two.
Your card will make her birthday very special


Question:  Is the first sentence above written correctly?  It's the word "your" I am questioning. 

Do you have another idea on how to restructure the sentence with the same idea? 

asked Sep 24 '11 at 20:51 LuAnne Jones New member

1 answer


'Your' is correct here, as 'sending' functions as a noun so requires a possessive. Of course this usage is changing and 'you' would be acceptable.



link comment edited Sep 25 '11 at 06:23 Mark Heyne Expert

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