Passive Voice Use

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How would I change "was excited" to a more active voice rather than passive? what are some suggestions?

See example:

In a way, I was excited to be going off to college and be subjected to residence life at Virginia State University.
asked Sep 20 '11 at 19:34 Ashley New member

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" I was excited" is not a passive, it's an adjective, and it sounds just fine. "To be subjected to" is in the passive voice, and it also sounds fine, but i would say " life as a resident".

link comment answered Sep 21 '11 at 05:14 Mark Heyne Contributor
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"In a way, it is exciting to be going off to college and dealing with the prospect of residence life at Virginia State University."

link comment answered Oct 11 '11 at 12:20 Shaila Fernandes Expert

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