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Hello, I'd like to know if it's correct or not?

 

"I'd studied fashion design, and then I've become a bag designer."
 

 

 

Thanks

asked Sep 20 '11 at 08:05 maya New member

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one connector/connective is enough no need of then.

you could use so

 

it would be better to write 

I studied fashion design so/and/but I've become a bag designer.

link comment answered Sep 20 '11 at 15:04 Rahul Gupta Expert
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"I studied fashion design, and became a bag designer."

link comment answered Oct 11 '11 at 14:43 Shaila Fernandes Expert

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