Missing article?

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In this sentence:

 

"According to Department of Education (2010), Upward Bound was the
first TRIO program created by Lyndon B. Johnson administration’s “War
on Poverty” in 1964."

Should it read "According to the Department of Education (2010)..."?

 

Thanks,

Monique

asked Sep 17 '11 at 23:00 Monique New member

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Yes, you should include the "the".

 

Also, the sentence implies that the administration's 'War' generated many programs in 1964, of which, Upward Bound was the first. Is this correct? If not, you should rework the sentence a little.

link comment answered Sep 18 '11 at 00:12 Siân Harris Expert

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