Need Help Regarding Grammar in My Story !

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Hii, Im Sandeep. I have seen your profile on facebook and i came here to ask your help. Recently, i have written a short story and i am not sure about my grammar. For reading it may take around 5 minuites. If you have some free time could you read my story and can you clarify my grammarical mistakes please.

This is the link to my story.

http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/short_story/sndp/strictly-not-for-children

edited Aug 31 '11 at 09:40 Sndp New member

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Normally, we do not check full texts in this forum.   I have posted your question on Twitter and Facebook, perhaps someone there will be able to help you with your writing.

link answered Sep 01 '11 at 23:32 Kimberly Expert

Thank you :) SndpJan 12 '12 at 08:33

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