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Therfore,every person needs to have goals in order to get succes in his life.

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Therfore, Every person, needs to have goals in order to get succes in his life.like
asked Aug 30 '11 at 20:58 GOROM New member

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Make sure you have established why this statement would be true- "therefore" implies that you are making a logical conclusion based on prior statements!   This is how Americans would phrase it:

Therefore every person needs to have goals in order to succeed in life.

link answered Aug 31 '11 at 00:04 Susan Brett Herod New member

Don't forget the comma after 'therefore'! KimberlySep 01 '11 at 01:13

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'Therefore, every one should  have goals in order to succeed in life.'  'Therefore, every person needs to have goals to get success in life.' The second statement seems to be wordy. Even if 'to have' is removed and 'get success' is changed to 'succeed', the statement makes a correct sense.

link comment answered Sep 01 '11 at 03:51 Hasta Bhattarai New member

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