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Walked out the car quickly and headed directly to the front door…I opened the door, walked in quickly towards the common room where Nadia was lying on the ground with her head bloody all over and Daryl kneeling over her with a towel in his hand, sobbing.
asked Aug 27 '11 at 03:43 Heather Smith New member

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I walked from the car quickly and headed directly to the front door; I opened the door and walked in quickly toward the common room, where Nadia was lying on the ground with her head all bloody, and a sobbing Daryl was kneeling over her with a towel in his hand.

link comment answered Aug 27 '11 at 18:22 Stephen Merchant New member
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we wanted success . now then we happy oyherwise what up?oh no what are you doing.

 

link comment answered Aug 29 '11 at 07:41 SHWETA New member
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Walked out the car quickly and headed directly to the front door…I opened the door, walked in quickly towards the common room where Nadia was lying on the ground with her head bloody all over and Daryl kneeling over her with a towel in his ha

link comment answered Aug 29 '11 at 07:53 SHWETA New member
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I walked out the car quickly and headed directly to the front door…I opened the door, walked in quickly towards the common room where Nadia was laid on the ground with her bloody head  all over and Daryl on his kneels beside her with a towel in his hand, sobbing.

link comment answered Aug 30 '11 at 09:26 Augusto Reis New member

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