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If the company would not accept this requirement as according in the biggest loser to the news agency, Google need to change their behaviors to follow Chinese rules and law because a culture difference required by demographic and economic effective of changing to maintain social order, which could be dealing no industry code of repressive governments as searching into violated censorship in China.
asked Aug 15 '11 at 00:27 franceschan New member

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This should be several separate sentences to make up a paragraph.  Though I can follow the general idea of what you are talking about, there are too many errors to allow one to make sense of it.  Try breaking it down into several sentences first. 

link comment answered Aug 15 '11 at 01:44 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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