Punctuation hint ?

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On Mother's discharge she moved in with me, took over the bedroom, while I slept on the sofa.

Grammarly suggests that there should perrhaps be a comma after 'On Mother's discharge, she moved in .....' to improve this sentence. How does it improve???

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On Mother's discharge she moved in with me, took over the bedroom, while I slept on the sofa.
asked Aug 11 '11 at 05:02 Graham Hung New member

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