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Grammarly did not identify the missing 'comma' after "According to Sampson and Moore", women in senior......

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According to Sampson and Moore women in senior corporate positions stated that some of the challenges they continued to face were: " failure of senior leadership to assume accountability for women' advancement, stereotypes and preconceived notions of women' abilities and roles, commitment to personal and family responsibilities, and exclusion from formal networks" .
asked Jul 13 '13 at 19:29 Lillie Linear New member

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These are the corrections needed in your sentence:

 

According to Sampson and Moore, women in senior corporate positions stated that some of the challenges they continued to face were "failure of senior leadership to assume accountability for women' advancement, stereotypes and preconceived notions of women' abilities and roles, commitment to personal and family responsibilities, and exclusion from formal networks."

link comment answered Jul 15 '13 at 16:20 Elin Tomov Contributor

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