how can this thesis statement be written without using an conjunction"home schooled children are better educated but lack in social skills"
Thesis statement: Home schooled children are better educated but lack in social skills.
Though they may lack in social skills, home-schooled children are often better educated.
I don't know why you want to avoid using a conjunction either. Notice I softened the statement up a bit with "may" and "often". Depending on what you are writing, you may need to cite a source to show why you can say that these students are better educated and lack social skills.
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