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For your information, we have reviewed all the SOPs . We would appreciate if you could re-check and revert to us if you have any amendment/inquiry on the SOPs. We would be submit the SOPs for CFO approval on 28th June 2013 (Friday).
Your cooperation in this matter is much highly appreciated.
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We have reviewed the SOPs. We would be grateful if you would check them and revert to us if you have any amendments or inquiries/enquiries. We shall submit them to the CFO for approval on Friday, 28th June 2013. Your co-operation in this matter is highly appreciated.
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