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Dear all,

For your information, we have reviewed all the SOPs . We would appreciate if you could re-check and revert to us if you have any amendment/inquiry on the SOPs. We would be submit the SOPs for CFO approval on 28th June 2013 (Friday).

Your cooperation in this matter is much highly appreciated.

Thank you

asked Jun 24 '13 at 09:15 azuin New member

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I would suggest:

We have reviewed the SOPs.   We would be grateful if you would check them and revert to us if you have any amendments or inquiries/enquiries.   We shall submit them to the CFO for approval on Friday, 28th June 2013.   Your co-operation in this matter is highly appreciated.

link comment answered Jun 24 '13 at 09:45 Michael Cranfield Expert

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