correcting could in a sentence

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The family has been educated concerning the patient's condition. They need to make a decision based on this education. How may I re-write this sentence?

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Based on their being educated about Matts' condition the family could then make an educated decision.
asked Jun 23 '13 at 23:13 Mika Parker New member

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Matt's relatives have been advised about his condition and they are now in a position  to make an informed decision

(Educated decision is not bad but more often describes a guess, which is not what poor Matt needs!)

link comment edited Jun 24 '13 at 10:46 Michael Cranfield Expert

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