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A confident, pro-active individual who has a sense of responsibility to fulfill duty at work, possesses sufficient ability of learning and analyzing, especially in Aerospace domain.

asked Jun 21 '13 at 16:49 BangBangBang New member

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It is an object clause; not a sentence as such, but could be made one if preceded, for example, by

  • I am
  • We are looking for

and then

 

a responsible, confident, pro-active individual,  willing and able to learn analytically in the field of aerospace.

 

Note: Is there a problem with this sentence?   If there is, how can I improve it?

 

And, in British English, it's fulfil.

link edited Jun 21 '13 at 18:36 Michael Cranfield Expert

Thank you.

BangBangBangJun 22 '13 at 05:55

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