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Both the ethical and economic concerns play in the minds of health care costs policy makers.
asked Jun 20 '13 at 01:00 Paula Cunningham New member

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I would suggest

 

"Both ethical and economic concerns influence healthcare policies with regard to costs."

 

("play on the minds" is the expression but sounds too informal in this context).

link comment answered Jun 20 '13 at 12:32 Michael Cranfield Expert

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