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Activities aimed decreasing emanation,adding carbon depot and decreasing belief on mineral fuel can definitely impression the amount of Carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gas in the ambiance.Actually it costs fewer to shorten the greenhouse effects emanation now than to assume the climate change

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It is difficult to determine exactly what you are trying to say.  There are a number of word choices that don’t fit.  Check these words in the dictionary so that you know what they mean:  depot, belief, impression, ambiance, assume.  Then pick different words that mean what you are trying to say.  You need to do that before we can correct the grammatical errors here.  

link comment answered Jun 19 '13 at 13:54 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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