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how would y"all re-word this sentence

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Losing a family member is a very hard and tragic experience for someone to go through.
asked Jun 15 '13 at 02:16 LaToya Snyder New member

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Practice writing properly, LaToya, even when you think it doesn't matter. It always matters and will help improve your skills.

 

Losing a family member is a tragic and difficult experience.

 

Saying "for someone to go through" is redundant. We can assume that it is "someone" who has lost a family member. When you "go through something", you experience it. You've already noted that it s an experience.

link comment edited Jun 15 '13 at 05:08 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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