Please check if my sentence is correct. I feel there is something wrong

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"It is the specialty of a clothes make it become fashionable for people do like clothes that can express their personality" Is this sentence grammatically correct. What I want to say is that a clothes can be fashionable if it is special because of that people love to express personality.

asked Jun 10 '13 at 15:51 wangfa627 New member

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I understand that English is not your native language (nor is our alphabet either), so congratulations on trying to learn our often confusing and complicated language. That being said, your sentence and even the explanation are almost hopeless.


Don’t try to use every word in your limited vocabulary with each sentence you write or every phrase you speak. What I think you are trying to say can be accomplished easily and with considerably fewer words. Here is an example:


“Fashionable clothes make it possible for people who care about their appearance to express their personality.”

Good luck with your studies!

link comment answered Jun 10 '13 at 16:09 Brother Dave Contributor
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As per our discussion of oil filtration machine. During material loading time we noticed there was no damage to the wheel, and also during usage of oil filtration machine on a site we never move to one place to another place .It was clearly say’s during transportation it may be happening .

link comment answered Jul 13 '13 at 07:43 raja New member
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As per our discussion of oil filtration machine. During material loading time we noticed there was no damage to the wheel, and also during usage of oil filtration machine on a site we never move to one place to another place .It was clearly say’s during transportation it may be happening .

link comment answered Jul 13 '13 at 07:43 raja New member
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I come from a medium family. My childhood was fun and memorable. I went to the elementary school when I was just 5, I had made lots of good friends there, until third class I had been in Peshawa school but my family moved to another place, I had to change schools and leave all my friends , It was really hard but I found a new friend in the new school and enjoyed with them. My adolescence was normal. I just studied for increase my grade then after 6 years, I moved to the stage of the university and studied Agricultural Engineering. I really did not like it the first time. Nevertheless, the presence of my friends made me love there. We went to picnics, saw some celebrities, and we partied hard. We’ve been to many different nice places. My graduation was terrible, because I had to leave my lovely friends, who I saw them every day. But at that time, we had to began a new life, and I tried to find a job because of my nature I don’t like to be unemployed. So I got a job at a company from UAE as an agricultural engineer. Now I work on 3 big projects in Sulaymaniyah for about more than 1 a year on an irrigation project there and it’s not even finished, I love my job and I try to improve my work more than more so. Now I am worried about 2 different companies which have offered me new jobs I might get a big job promotion. About my future, I like traveling and know about different culture so I have a plan to go to the UAE to be more experienced in this field, and will meet with my boss and it will assist me in my vocation, Hopefully, I will help to advance my community

link comment answered Sep 01 '13 at 17:10 rozhgar New member
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20th September 2000 Dear Gary, Thanks for your letter of the 12th September. As I see it, we do one of three things:  we can postpone the school fete, and hope for better weather; have the school fete on the original date, but hold it in the school hall; or combine the school fete with the mid-term play. I don’t think the first option is practical or financially possible as we rely on the profits from the fete to assist with general operation expenses; the second option would mean we would not be able to hold such activities as the pony rides, or water bombing the teachers; always a popular event. All things considered, I think it is best to combine the school play and fete; make it one huge fundraising event. Gary, I look forward to hearing your suggestions. Yours sincerely, Malcolm Millsom

link comment answered Feb 17 at 15:29 hania New member

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