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For an ongoing purchased items or services I learned to create blanket purchase orders blanket orders are designed to make procurement processes more efficient whenever possible.
asked Jun 04 '13 at 18:06 Akhlas Kaczmar New member

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For ongoing purchased items or services, I learned to create blanket purchase orders; these orders are designed to make procurement processes more efficient whenever possible.

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 04:41 Guida Brown New member
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"For ongoing purchases of items or services, I created blanket purchase orders, whicha re designed to make procurement processes more efficient, if possible." I only changed this from Guida's because I think the semicolon adds an unneccesary redundancy on orders.

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 06:15 TyJBrown13 New member

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