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The clubs became a brand name and enjoyed a massive success during his time, from the treble winning of 1999 to two time hat-trick of titles between 1990 and 2013 are some of the notable titles.
asked Jun 02 '13 at 13:37 busty crooney New member

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Manchester United?  

 

"The Club became a brand name and enjoyed massive success during this time, as evidenced by the treble win in 1999 and the double hat-trick of Premier League titles between 1990 and 2o13."

 

However, this is really inside language, so only those intimately knowledgeable about football/soccer will understand it.  For more understanding, explain what a treble win is and what a hat-trick is, at least.

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 05:06 Guida Brown New member
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I am not sure what you are talking about, but I assume that "The Clubs" is a team or a nickname of a person.

The Clubs became a brand name and enjoyed massive success during his time. Some of his notable titles are treble (what do you mean here?) winning of 1999 to the double hat-trick of titles between 1990 and 2013.

link comment answered Jun 04 '13 at 12:32 Kimberly Expert

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