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How would i rewrite this sentence.

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In this paper, I will explain the role of nurse when combating microbial to drugs.
asked Jun 02 '13 at 02:26 Shawn Swinton New member

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I think you left out “resistance.”

This paper explains the nurse’s role in combating microbial resistance to drugs.

Although it is not wrong to use “nursing,” it may get your paper passed over by other researchers.   If I saw “the role of nursing in combating microbial resistance to drugs” I might assume it is about the transmission of antibodies in breast milk and move on.   

link comment answered Jun 09 '13 at 05:04 PsyGuy New member
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"In this paper, I will explain the role of the nurse in combatting mirobial with drugs." If this is a formal paper though, you are going to be hammared for using I so flippantly in a thesis statement if your professor is decent.

link answered Jun 06 '13 at 06:24 TyJBrown13 New member

Absolutely! Do NOT use such an announcement for a thesis statement.

Elin TomovJun 06 '13 at 23:07

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Ahmad is correct. You could also say "nursing" instead of "nurse."

link comment answered Jun 04 '13 at 12:35 Kimberly Expert
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I don't understand "combating microbial to drugs."  Perhaps it should read, "In this paper, I will explain the role of THE nurse (or NURSING) when combating microbial WITH drugs."

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 05:11 Guida Brown New member
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Within this paper, the role of nursing vs. microbial will be explained.

 

In this paper, I will explain the role of nursing combatting microbial.

 

(but microbial WHAT? another word might be needed there, such as damage?)

 

In your version, combatting is mis-spelled, a double consonant makes short a vowel, a single consonant makes a long vowel , yours would sound like "combaaating".

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 11:48 RaChelle New member
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You should say "nursing" instead of "nurse." You are misusing the word "combat" here. "Combating...to drugs" makes no sense. Also, "microbial" is an adjective, yet there is no noun present for it to modify. Try this:

 

In this paper, I will explain the role of nursing when combating microbial infections with drugs.

link comment answered Jun 06 '13 at 14:35 Booker New member

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