Which sentence is best? Is "once" used correctly?

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The once doubtful and discouraged farmer became a military strategist, Israel’s 5th Judge, and was a member of the Faith Hall of Fame. 

 

 

A once doubtful and discouraged farmer, Gideon became a military strategist, Israel’s 5th Judge, and was a member of the Faith Hall of Fame.  

 

Note: I had mentioned earlier in the story that Gideon was a farmer.

asked May 28 '13 at 14:52 Susan New member

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