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Could you please have a look at the sentense below if it makes sense?

Thank you in advance for your help.

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This discussion will be visual recorded, as well as, the response will be used as data to help the investigator to answer the research question.
asked May 27 '13 at 22:41 sudarat makeshine New member

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This discussion will be visually recorded. Additionally, the response will be used as data to help the investigator answer the research question.

link comment answered May 28 '13 at 13:19 Kimberly Expert

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