how do I rephrase this sentence
Women entrepreneurs are less likely to be members of associations than men entrepreneurs it is four-times more likely that men are members of business associations.
Your sentence is full of redundancy. Try not to repeat the same words in a sentence. This is actually two sentences. The second sentence should start with the word it. There are many ways to rewrite this. Here is one:
Eighty percent of business association members are men.
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