how do I rephrase this sentence


Women entrepreneurs are less likely to be members of associations than men entrepreneurs it is four-times more likely that men are members of business associations.

asked May 25 '13 at 08:20 Alisha New member

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Your sentence is full of redundancy. Try not to repeat the same words in a sentence.  This is actually two sentences.  The second sentence should start with the word it.  There are many ways to rewrite this.  Here is one:


Eighty percent of business association members are men.

link comment answered May 25 '13 at 12:57 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

The question is what is a nourishing breakfast? They might be having breakfast but is it nourishing. We have to look into who have access to nourishing food. If we take the people on welfare their fridges are full with unhealthy food because that’s what they can afford. People with more money have access to more nourishing food because they can afford them. 

link comment answered Oct 30 '14 at 04:18 Smeraldine Rose New member

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