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Again, I met with Dr. xyz to go over what I could do differently and he explained that the second paper's grading rubric was a lot stricter and that the grade was not a cause for alarm.
I suggest breaking this down into two sentences. It seems that the second paper has already been graded, so I have to wonder about the tense of doing something differently. “Go over” is quite informal. Depending on the purpose of the writing, I would consider using something other than slang.
Again, I met with Dr. Xyz to discuss what I could have done differently. He explained that the second paper’s grading rubric was a lot stricter and that the grade was not a cause for alarm.
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