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The article is about the issue that  Angelina Jolie case highlights (accent) new ways to treat breast cancer, she shares intimate details of her anatomy to help women at risk, going public with her preventive double mastectomy to greatly reduce her high odds of breast cancer. That means here has 3 different ways to treat the breast cancer for some women whose got breast cancer.

asked May 19 '13 at 11:05 alisonskf New member

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The article is about the issue that Angelina Jolie's case highlights (accent) new ways to treat breast cancer. She (you had a run-on sentence.) shares intimate details of her anatomy to help women at risk, going public with her preventive double mastectomy to greatly reduce her high odds of breast cancer. This means here there are three different ways to treat (erased "the") breast cancer for some women (Delete: whose got breast cancer.).

link comment answered May 20 '13 at 13:32 Kimberly Expert

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