is this a correct sentence

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would this be correct sentence

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One of the things that really affected me was the way white European missionaries used the bible as a bargaining tool.
asked May 17 '13 at 04:47 Tony Dawkins New member

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You need to capitalize bible, but you are fine other than that. Some would argue for a comma between 'white' and 'European', but I think this isn't necessary in this case.

 

One of the things that really affected me was the way white European missionaries used the Bible as a bargaining tool.

link comment answered May 17 '13 at 13:22 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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You can rewrite your sentence that would have a smooth flow to it.

Example: When the White European missionaries used the Bible as a bargaining tool, that really affected me.

link comment answered May 17 '13 at 15:25 brandon helling New member

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