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Political systems include two aspects: individualism versus collectivism and democracy versus totalitarianism. Similar to China, North Korea and Cuba, the Vietnamese government pursues the socialist ideology of Karl Max, which classified into collectivism and totalitarianism. The Communists believe that stated resources should be divided equally to all people, and state-owned companies are the primary means of resources distribution. Contact with foreigners was prohibited as it would destroy the nation’s peace and culture; hence, Vietnam has been isolated from the whole world until 1986. Duplicated political and economic policies from the brotherhood Chinese communists, the Vietnamese communists declared a new policy which encouraging foreign trade and foreign direct investment. By enacting Foreign Investment Law in the beginning of the 1990s, Vietnamese economics has been flourishing along with more liberalization and structural reforms from a self-sufficient economy to a socialist-oriented market economy in an attempt to integrate to the world market.

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Duplicated political and economic policies from the brotherhood Chinese communists, the Vietnamese communists declared a new policy which encouraging foreign trade and foreign direct investment.
asked Jul 20 '11 at 17:06 Hong Huong Van Lugsch New member

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which encouraging foreign trade and foreign direct investment. 

 

Try "which encourages".

 

It is not clear what else you want checked here.  Please specify in the comments below.

link comment answered Jul 21 '11 at 22:06 Kimberly Expert
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Hi Kimberly

 

I checked the sentence posted here and Grammarly said that it was unclearly and wordiness. Therefore, I didnt know why???

link comment answered Jul 22 '11 at 15:06 Hong Huong Van Lugsch New member

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