Commas with conjunctions and prepositions
My boss inists we use commas very sparingly. With this in mind, which commas could be omitted in the following:
The most common suggestions are to extend operating hours and expand the coverage area. However, in Brooklyn, one of the top suggestions is to allow users to share memberships.
I agree with Lewis. In a formal sense, all of the commas are required. The Chicago Manual of Style suggests that, in less formal contexts, the comma following "however" is sometimes omitted.
The placement of however is a problem. While there is no absolute rule about beginning a sentence with however, Garner's Modern American Usage suggests that--contrary to your middle school English teach-- using But to begin a sentence is better than using However. However is best placed in the middle of the sentence.
One of the best suggestions, however, is to ...
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