is this phrase right?
Annually the high cost of the potholes repairs do actually changes this is due to the temperature or weather conditions and the frequent capacity of the roads, for instance in the winter time, the levels of potholes do rise significantly.
This is a run-on sentence and doesn't make complete sense to me, so I don't know how to best suggest rewriting it. This is what I think you may be trying to say.
Annually, the high cost of the potholes repairs does change. This is due variations throughout the year in the temperature or weather conditions as well as the frequency of traffic on the roads. For instance, in the winter time, the number of potholes does rise significantly.
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