I do not understand the problem

0

I am writing to confirm your acceptance of employment offer and to tell you how delighted I am to have had you on my team. I feel confident that you will make a significant contribution at your new job and I am glad that you have chosen to take a job offer within the Department of Human Services Agency; the skills that you possess will be used tremendously.

Ms. Funez has worked for San Joaquin County for the past two years under my supervision and is resigning from her position as an Eligibility Worker II May 17 to start a new position as a Social Worker with The Department of Aging in In Home Supportive Services (IHSS)

Ms. Funez will be remembered as well-liked by her co-workers, a valuable team player, and brainy; her keenness to work ethnics will be remembered within Unit 1D. Ms. Funez work performance has been outstanding. She will be an access to her new unit.

See example:

I feel confident that you will make a significant contribution at your new job and I am glad that you have chosen to take a job offer within the Department of Human Services Agency; the skills that you possess will be used tremendously.
asked May 06 '13 at 21:35 Teresa Johnson New member

Can you provide more context? Was this flagged in the Grammarly Editor? What did it suggest?

KimberlyMay 07 '13 at 12:04

add comment

0 answers


Your answer


Write at least 20 characters

Have a question about English grammar, style or vocabulary use? Ask now to get help from Grammarly experts for FREE.