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Im not sure how to fix this sentence any advice

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For now, there are many issues being exposed that need to be addressed such as confidential information.
asked May 04 '13 at 18:57 Kerry E. Harper New member

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There are too many ideas in one sentence, aside from rewording to form a couple sentences, it may be enough just to move things around.



For now, there are many issues, such as confidential information, being exposed that need to be addressed.

 

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For now, there are many issues, such as confidential information, being exposed. These need to be addressed.

link comment answered May 07 '13 at 11:39 Kimberly Expert

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