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How could I make my point across with shorter lenght?

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This is because positive aspects tend to focus on large economic gains for corporations while the negative aspects tend to focus on the inequalities and injustice such as widening gap of rich and poor and harming the environment.
asked May 03 '13 at 07:26 Seung Ah Lee New member

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It is very well written and do not understand why you want to rewrite this; however here are some edits that will cut down your word count.

This is because the positive aspects focus on corporate, economic gains while the negative aspects focus on inequalities and injustices such as the widening gap of rich and poor or environmental damage.

link comment answered May 03 '13 at 11:18 Kimberly Expert

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