comparing
How would you change the words to compare the oxford art online with wikipedia
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The Oxford Art Online has a scholarly tone of voice that is supported by evidence where as the Wikipedia tone appears to be geared to a more general audience needing a quick resource for information.
asked Jul 15 '11 at 18:32
Tama Exsted
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Tama Exsted
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The Oxford Art Online has a scholarly tone of voice that is supported by evidence where as the Wikipedia tone appears to be geared to a more general audience than that of the OAO. Wikipedia seems written for those needing a quick resource for information.
Grammarly is catching this because it reads as an incomplete comparison.
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answered Jul 18 '11 at 17:49
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