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How would you change the words to compare the oxford art online with wikipedia

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The Oxford Art Online has a scholarly tone of voice that is supported by evidence where as the Wikipedia tone appears to be geared to a more general audience needing a quick resource for information.
asked Jul 15 '11 at 18:32 Tama Exsted New member

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The Oxford Art Online has a scholarly tone of voice that is supported by evidence where as the Wikipedia tone appears to be geared to a more general audience than that of the OAO.  Wikipedia seems written for those needing a quick resource for information.

 

Grammarly is catching this because it reads as an incomplete comparison.

link comment answered Jul 18 '11 at 17:49 Kimberly Expert

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