How can i chang this sentence
what is wrong with the first sentence? In ten years, I will be working
In ten years, I will be married to a wonderful man with two beautiful children.
The first answer is not wrong. There are just some typos.
It is better to say:
In ten years, I will be the mother of two children and married to a wonderful man.
It is better to write it this way because the way you have it written suggests that the wonderful husband will already have two children.
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