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what is wrong with the first sentence? In ten years, I will be working

See example:

In ten years, I will be married to a wonderful man with two beautiful children.
asked Jul 10 '11 at 23:06 sylvia Plummer New member

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The first answer is not wrong.  There are just some typos. 

 

It is better to say:

In ten years, I will be the mother of two children and married to a wonderful man.

 

 It is better to write it this way because the way you have it written suggests that the wonderful husband will already have two children.

link comment edited Jul 12 '11 at 16:20 Kimberly Expert
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in ten years, I well be a Mather of two children with a wonderful man.

link comment answered Jul 11 '11 at 08:03 askalech New member
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In ten years, I will made to children with a wonderful man.

link comment answered Jul 11 '11 at 21:52 dimbo maguiraga New member
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In ten years, I will make two children with a wonderful man

link comment answered Jul 11 '11 at 21:57 dimbo maguiraga New member

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