Sentence is Grammatically correct or wrong?
While writing a letter to the Manager of my company I've started the letter as:
"I, Raju Saha, working in your esteemed organisation, in Accounts Department".
Now Raju Saha is my name, and I'd like to know whether this sentence is grammatically correct or wrong, with specific reason.
Please revert to my mail id: firstname.lastname@example.org
I send you one original poem, witch you tookit, and You did not give me back. I now dath I make erros writing, but step by step I lern allvays semthing new, and I can be much beter in few wiks. Thank You for Your antention, sincerly, Biljana Biljanovska
|link||answered Jul 12 '11 at 08:59 Biljana Biljanovska New member|
This introduction seems very formal, but it is almost perfectly correct. I suggest that you add a definite article - 'the' - before Accounts Department. We use 'the' to designate that this is a particular accounts department for the organisation. We generally use 'the' before all unique nouns.
|link||answered Jul 12 '11 at 17:20 Kimberly Expert|
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