Sentence is Grammatically correct or wrong?

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While writing a letter to the Manager of my company I've started the letter as:

"I, Raju Saha, working in your esteemed organisation, in Accounts Department".

 

Now Raju Saha is my name, and I'd like to know whether this sentence is grammatically correct or wrong, with specific reason.

 

Please revert to my mail id: rajusahantc@gmail.com

asked Jul 10 '11 at 16:17 Raju Saha New member

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I send you one original poem, witch you tookit, and You did not give me back. I now dath I make erros writing, but step by step I lern allvays semthing new, and I can be much beter in few wiks. Thank You for Your antention, sincerly, Biljana Biljanovska

link answered Jul 12 '11 at 08:59 Biljana Biljanovska New member

Biljana, please send a clear question to the forum. To send a question, click 'Ask Question' in the upper right corner. KimberlyJul 12 '11 at 17:17

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Raju, 

 

This introduction seems very formal, but it is almost perfectly correct.  I suggest that you add a definite article - 'the' - before Accounts Department.  We use 'the' to designate that this is a particular accounts department for the organisation.  We generally use 'the' before all unique nouns.

link answered Jul 12 '11 at 17:20 Kimberly Expert

Hi Kimberly, Thank you very much for your reply. But there is another question is there. Somebody told me, it would be only correct if I write this sentence as: "I, Raju Saha, is working in your esteemed organisation, in Accounts Department". Can you please suggest me whether this would again correct or wrong. I know you will say again that I should use "THE" before the department name, but I have keep the sentence intact to know the answer. Please help. Regards Raju Saha email: rajusahantc@gmail.com Raju SahaJul 12 '11 at 18:24

It would be incorrect to say: "I, Raju Saha, is. . .". KimberlyJul 12 '11 at 18:37

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