The first thing human beings all do once they come to the world is breathe.

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Did I write the above sentence correctly about garmmar.  Thanks!

asked Apr 18 '13 at 06:42 Elsa Chui New member

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I would omit 'beings', change 'once' to 'when', and change 'in' to 'into'. I would also move 'all' to before 'humans'.

 

The first thing all humans do when they come into the world is breathe.

link comment answered Apr 18 '13 at 13:04 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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