sentence structure

I dont know what went wrong with my sentence. please help me!

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This proof that students are being trained and prepare to start junior year to become a better writer.

asked Jul 09 '11 at 19:24

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I like to make a stab at this answer:

This proves that students, starting junior year, are being trained and prepared to become a better writer.

link	answered Jul 10 '11 at 05:45 Mike Shih New member

. . .to become better writers. (plural is better because we are talking about students, plural. – Kimberly – Jul 12 '11 at 16:24

Hi Kimberly, I agree. Thank you. – Mike Shih – Jul 13 '11 at 16:24

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The following answer is better:

This proves that students, starting junior year, are being trained and prepared to become better writers.

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answered Jul 13 '11 at 16:27

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