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I dont know what went wrong with my sentence. please help me!

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This proof that students are being trained and prepare to start junior year to become a better writer.
asked Jul 09 '11 at 19:24 Valeria Qiuntari New member

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I like to make a stab at this answer:

 

This proves that students, starting junior year, are being trained and prepared to become a better writer.

 

link answered Jul 10 '11 at 05:45 Mike Shih New member

. . .to become better writers. (plural is better because we are talking about students, plural. KimberlyJul 12 '11 at 16:24

Hi Kimberly, I agree. Thank you. Mike ShihJul 13 '11 at 16:24

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The following answer is better:


This proves that students, starting junior year, are being trained and prepared to become better writers.

 

link comment answered Jul 13 '11 at 16:27 Mike Shih New member

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