narrative paragraph

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please help me idenitfy how I can word this sentence

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My mind started wondering at what point in this process would they want to sleep?
asked Apr 11 '13 at 17:10 Brianna Knowles New member

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At what point in this process would they want to sleep? I wondered.  I wondered at what point in this process would they want to sleep?

link comment answered Apr 11 '13 at 17:29 Peggy Knott New member
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You don't need to say, 'My mind started wondering...' Your mind is the only thing that can wonder. This can be written several ways. Here are two.

 

I started wondering at what point in this process would they want to sleep?

I started to wonder at what point in this process would they want to sleep?

link comment answered Apr 11 '13 at 17:18 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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