Can you correct that following text into a proper sentence/s please

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Just want to rephrase it but everytime I make changes it does not come right at all

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Learning experience through education and practice has played this major role in his life and hence the korero is truly becomes a part of his transformative influences.
asked Apr 10 '13 at 01:43 derick williams New member

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Learning experience through education and practice has played a major role in his life, and, hence, the korero has truly become a part of his transformative influences.  Is "korero" a proper noun?  If it is, it should be capitalized.

link comment answered Apr 11 '13 at 15:06 Peggy Knott New member

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