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Finally, the effectiveness is tested by the effect it has had on the receiver
asked Apr 06 '13 at 20:04 Destiny Lee New member

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Basically, you are saying that the effectiveness is tested by effectiveness. You need more substance to the sentence. How is the effectiveness being determIned? I don't know the context, so I'll make something up to explain. Let's say that you want to determine the effectiveness of a direct mail advertising campaign. The effectiveness is measured by the change in sales volume for the targeted demographics.

link comment edited Apr 06 '13 at 23:00 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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