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Finally, the effectiveness is tested by the effect it has had on the receiver
Basically, you are saying that the effectiveness is tested by effectiveness. You need more substance to the sentence. How is the effectiveness being determIned? I don't know the context, so I'll make something up to explain. Let's say that you want to determine the effectiveness of a direct mail advertising campaign. The effectiveness is measured by the change in sales volume for the targeted demographics.
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