My teacher said it's wrong .I don't undersand .Give me your oppinions about that .please correct it.

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There is a team of highly skilled labor, talent. Improving labor productivity and employee creativity. Human Resources Management is an important asset to any business .

asked Apr 05 '13 at 23:49 James Cather New member

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Your teacher is correct, James. I'll take each sentence individually.

 

There is a team of highly skilled labor, talent.

You should replace the comma with 'and'.

 

Improving labor productivity and employee creativity.

This is a dependent clause and isn't a complete thought. You need to add an independent clause to correct this.

 

Human Resources Management is an important asset to any business .

This sentence is grammatically correct but Human Resources Management should not be capitalized. It would only be capitalized if it were the proper title in a business environment. Since you are speaking of any business, it defies imagination to think all businesses would use the same name for their HR departments.

link comment answered Apr 06 '13 at 01:49 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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An additional note about the last sentence:

Management, per se, is not an asset.  Good management can be an intangible asset.  Bad management can be a liability.  You might instead say that effective HR management is an important component of a successful business.

 

Also, you have a repeated punctuation error in three of the four sentences in your subject line.  A sentence ends with either a period, a question mark, or an explanation point.  There is no space between the last word of the sentence and the punctuation. 

link comment edited Apr 06 '13 at 04:01 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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