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The few studies that do exist focus on the long-term effects of childhood maltreatment, but fail to take into account the potential coping mechanisms in victims of childhood maltreatment in obese adults with disordered eating.
asked Apr 05 '13 at 00:34 Destini Kirkwood New member

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The few studies that do exist focus on certain long-term effects of childhood maltreatment, but fail to address the potential for adult-onset eating disorders as one of them.

link comment answered Apr 05 '13 at 00:58 Shawn Mooney Expert

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