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"When you edit the document, please could you write a quick comment outlining what you change and add" or "When you edit the document, please could you write a quick comment outlining what you changed and added"?

present past tense asked Apr 04 '13 at 21:10 Ming Yin New member

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The second sentence is better but I would make two additional changes to it:  change When you edit to When you have edited, and change please could you to could you please

link comment answered Apr 04 '13 at 23:48 Shawn Mooney Expert

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